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Tasty toon

The song starts out fine, nothing to complain about, but at 0:15 you can really tell how this song could be applied to a mainstream base of dubstep listeners, something you could see on the top of the charts bringing a variety beyond the almost cynical standard grimy dubstep people are so use to listening to, it will really come down to how you pull this "preview" off into a full feature song from start to finish. I'm not sure if its just because your using FL5 but to really send this out to a extremely large audience I feel that there is this professional sense missing, the skill is there but its the fact you don't have the resources and the budget that a studio could pull off (or maybe its my lack of technical music knowledge in understanding what I am trying to describe), but the talent as stated is there and the potential is defiantly there. I really like hearing stuff like this, brings a new twist in my opinion to (which I am exposed to, to a limited extent) a scene that could use it.

Dem vocalz

I feel as though you went just a bit to far with the vocals a little bit to much splittin and splicin here and there, and the phase feels to far from the soul of the beat. I feel as though the vocals are trying to expand on the space of the beat but just aren't doing it with the beats condensed nature.

Hell I don't even know if making any damn sense but anyways good toonage :)

Experimentations

I feel as though this has a little experimenting with it which is always good, liking the "kick back and chill" thing you got going on with this. The double kicks feel a bit messy though in my own personal listening opinion. Great track though :)